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FIC: Out of the Bag
SPN - Dean looking sideways
Title: Out of the Bag
Author: twasadark
Genre: Gen
Characters: Dean, Sam, OFC
Rating: PG
Spoilers: None
Disclaimer: I disclaim everything! Everywhere! Forever!
Summary: Dean is strangely reluctant to join a hunt.  Why? Read on ...
Notes: Feedback, please!


Dean cupped the back of her head with his warm, strong hand.  Starting at that place where her skull and the stop of her spine intersected, he slid his palm downward, sliding over her shoulders, following the line of her backbone in a smooth long caress that sent shivers of pleasure across every nerve ending. He lifted his hand again, cupping her cheek this time, making her arch up to meet that gentleness, to encourage his wandering touch and allow his skin to cover more of her.  His hand skimmed the same slow path across her back again, the pleasure more intense this time, causing her to make a low deep purr at the back of her throat. 

He leaned his face closer, the clean, beautiful lines of it mesmerizing her.  She inhaled the spicy, irresistible scent of his body; noted the smell of alcohol ghosting from between his sweetly parted lips.

“You are such a pretty girl,” he said, hushed and wondering.  She liked the sound of his voice, so alien and soft.

When his hand came to the base of her spine, at that place where she most liked to be touched, she couldn’t help herself: she arched again, surging toward his large, intoxicating presence.

The flare of a flashlight swept across them, followed by a voice, sharp with emotion.  “Dean, come on, we have to go.”

Dean’s hand stilled.  He turned to face the large dark-haired form that appeared next to him.  “Sam, I’m kind of busy here.”

Sam made a noise of annoyance.  “We don’t have time for this.  Remember the ghost of the pet store?  The one we’re here to vanquish?  I just heard it in the back.  Come on -- let’s get it already.”

Dean sighed, withdrew his hand.  “Sorry, beautiful,” he said to her, voice lowered in regret.  “Gotta go.” 

And then he turned around, following his brother’s form through the darkness.

She watched him go, missing his touch already.  A sudden, fierce longing told her she wouldn’t see him again.  That thought made a sound erupt from her throat, the only sound she could make. 



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oh, this is BRILLIANT.

poor kitty. :/

;-) Glad you liked it! And thanks for commenting!

Ahhhhhh!! You had me going there! Brilliant!

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ;-)

Aww! Dean is such a closet cat person!


I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! My cat inspired it ... ;-)

Dean with kitty! :-D I love it!

I'm so glad you liked it! wish I was a kitty sometimes! ;-)


So glad you liked it! thanks for reading and commenting! I love your icon, btw. Very cool!

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Yet another disappointed pussy being left behind--the story of Dean's life! Great little psych-out, my friend! Thanks for the laugh! HUGS, Robin

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Psych-outs are sure fun sometimes! ;-)

Lovely, lovely story, you got me at the end purrs ;)

;-) Thanks for reading and commenting! And purring, of course.


Ok, I have to admit that having 8 cats in the house I pretty much guessed on the first paragraph, but it was still a lovely well written little piece and yep, in my mind Dean is a sucker for the small furry kindred!

Thanks for making me smile this afternoon. :)

8 cats! Wow! You know what I'm talking about then, huh? This was inspired partly by one of our 3 cats. She has the most pathetic sounding meow ever. Just breaks your heart!

Thanks for reading and commenting - that makes me smile ;-)

Absolutely loved this - Dean's touch making all the girls melt, whatever persuasion they may be! My eight-week old kitten is presently on my lap, fascinated by my typing, I'm trying to turn her over to the Dean-side.

Awwww .... and 8 week old kittie! How sweet. Hope she'll be on the Dean-side soon! ;-)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Aww! So sweet. I've always thoght the boys should have a pet and a cat is easier than a dog in so many ways.

So glad you enjoyed it! Guess we animal lovers just have to put some critters in Supernatural when we can, huh? ;-)

LOL! Aww, Dean as a cat lover is almost too much to handle! =)

Great story, I was completely fooled until the end!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Kitties are so much fun ... ;-)

Oh man, you had me laughing out loud here at work. You SO got me with that one! Damn it! God, I'm still cracking up...

;-) !! Here you thought I was gonna get all jiggy with it, huh? LOL! Dave was even laughing out loud - first time he ever did that at one of my stories.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Naww, Dean! This is so sweet.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!